Feedback 25.11.09

Tom and Paul, yu have done some good work here. You need to try to use egs to illustrate how the conventions work etc. Please see comments for each post.  Use the checklist to ensure you complete all your research by tuesday's lesson. You need to add Ruby's name to the blog and Ruby, you need to contribute equally to this project in order to get any marks for it. So far, Tom & Paul you have done all the work. Don't forget to conduct some primary research into the target audience as well as secondary research. Analyse some videos - their use of genre conventions etc. You need to be working on this daily on an individual basis. Ensure you liase with eachother and share tasks equally.

Mrs A